Wednesday 3 March 2021

7.6.- Writing focused on sentence adverbs and how to write an essay



Do you eat meat? What do you think about people who don't eat meat? Why do you think they don't eat meat?



What do you know about this food brand?

The Tragic Real-Life of Colonel Sanders


Sadly, his dad died when he was just five years old.

 

Sadly = sentence adverb

 

Sentence adverbs


Some adverbs refer to a whole statement and not just a part of it. They are called sentence adverbs and they act as a comment, showing the attitude or opinion of the speaker or writer to a particular situation.

 

Clearly, there have been unacceptable delays.

(= It is clear that there have been unacceptable delays.)

 

Sadly, the forests are now under threat.

(= It is sad that the forests are now under threat.)

 

Curiously, he never visited America.

(= It's curious that he never visited America.)

 

The sentence adverbs are used to convey the writer or speaker's opinion that it is clear/sad/curious that something happened or is the case. If you compare the way clearly, sadly, and curiously are used in the next three sentences, you can easily see the difference between the meaning of the sentence adverbs and the 'ordinary' adverbs:

 

He spoke clearly and with conviction.

(= He spoke in a clear way and with conviction.)

 

She smiled sadly.

(= She smiled in a sad way.)

 

He looked at her curiously.

(= He looked at her in a curious/inquisitive way.)

https://www.lexico.com/grammar/sentence-adverbs

 

List of Sentence Adverbs

There are many different sentence adverbs that are usable at the beginning of a sentence. Here are some of the most commonly used ones:

Actually

Fortunately

Regrettably

Apparently

Hopefully

Seriously

Basically

Ideally

Strangely

Briefly

Incidentally

Surprisingly

Certainly

Indeed

Thankfully

Clearly

Interestingly

Theoretically

Conceivably

Ironically

Truthfully

Confidentially

Naturally

Ultimately

Curiously

Predictably

Wisely

Evidently

Presumably


Collaborative exercise 1 and individual exercise 2 on page 62.

 

Very bad animals: Funny unexpected moments video


Narrate some funny situations in the previous video using the sentence adverbs

 

What animal idioms do you know?


Chart about animal idioms

https://www.englishclub.com/vocabulary/idioms-animal.php


Quiz about animal idioms

https://www.englishclub.com/vocabulary/idioms-animal-quiz.php


What endangered animals do you know?


Endangered animals video


Collaborative reading of the sample essay on page 63


C1 Advanced Writing Requirements

 

The C1 Advanced Writing exam has two writing parts, which you must complete in 90 minutes. Both parts have a word limit of between 220-260 words. We recommend getting lots of writing practice under these conditions!

Part 1 is always a discursive essay. It requires you to think about arguments for and against a topic.

Part 2 is a situationally based writing task. This could be a letteran emaila reporta proposal or a review and you have three options to choose from.

  

Before you begin

 

When you turn over the paper and begin Writing Part 1, take some time to read the task instructions. Identify all parts of the question, underlining which parts are obligatory and noting which parts are optional.


Remember, you don’t have to use the opinions expressed in the box, but they may help you to get the ball rolling. Also, you only have to talk about two of the options given, not all three.

 

Make a plan

 

Take ten minutes to lay out your ideas. Make a pros and cons list for each of the three options and then decide which two you feel most confident with. Here’s some things you might come up with, can you think of any more?


Structure your essay

 

The essence of a good essay is a clear structure.

Introduction

Here you want to introduce the topic in your own words. Your first line should also grab the reader’s attention, then you should paraphrase the question. Finally, try using a statistic or a rhetorical question. This will make them want to read on, right?

Paragraph 1

Discuss the first option you’ve chosen. Include a good topic sentence and remember to give reasons for your answer. Describe some of the advantages, and even some of the disadvantages too. This will give a well-balanced argument.

Paragraph 2

Here’s where you introduce the second option. Again, try to present both sides of the argument and give reasons for your ideas. Gradually work towards the conclusion.

Conclusion

State your final opinion. This should be a summary of the rest of the essay and point clearly to which option you think is the most important. Do not introduce any new arguments at this stage. The conclusion is where you tie-up any loose ends.

  

Vocabulary

 

In the writing paper you should use a range of vocabulary, including less common lexis. Brainstorm some vocabulary related to the topic. Take your time to think of nouns and compound nouns that you know at C1 level. Really let your vocabulary sparkle.


Synonyms

 

No one likes a broken record. Find synonyms for simple words. You want to use a variety of language, and try not to repeat yourself too much. Check out these different ways of saying the same thing:

advantage: benefit, positive, upside

disadvantage: downside, drawback

effect: influence, impact, result, outcome

problem: issue, challenge, difficulty, obstacle, setback, complication

important: valuable, essential, beneficial

expensive: costly, dear, high-priced, extortionate

cheap: inexpensive, affordable, economical

big: great, large, sizeable, considerable, wide, vast

small: slight, tiny, little

 

Grammar

 

Experiment with different grammatical forms. At this level you’re expected to have a good grasp on the grammar. You should use a range of simple and complex grammatical forms with control and flexibility such as...

·         Participle clauses

·         Conditionals

·         Modal verbs

·         Passive with reporting verbs

·         Inversion

·         Cleft sentences

·         Comparatives

·         Relative clauses


Useful expressions

 

To make your essay flow it’s best to use some key phrases. These will link all your ideas together, and help it sound semi-formal. Take a look at the expressions below. Why not use some in your next essay?

Introduction:

It is often said that…

Many people feel that…

We live in an age when..

More and more…

Introducing & Addition:

Firstly, secondly, thirdly…

On the one hand…

In addition…

What is more…

Examples:

For example…

For instance…

As a case in point…

Contrasting:

In contrast…

On the other hand…

Alternatively…

However…

Conclusion:

All things considered…

As far as I am concerned…

In light of the above…

In conclusion…

 

What the examiners are looking for

 

When writing your essay, bear in mind what you’ll be marked on:

Content

Have you answered all parts of the question? Is everything relevant to the question?

Communicative Achievement

Is the style and tone appropriate? Remember it should be semi-formal and neutral.

Organisation

Does it follow a logical order? Have you used paragraphs and linking devices?

Language

Are you using a variety of grammar and vocabulary? Is it accurate?

 

Check

 

Now your masterpiece has come together. Remember to take time to check your work. Here’s the official Writing Checklist from Cambridge Assessment English. And our list of the most common mistakes:

·         spelling

·         subject + verb agreement

·         singulars / plurals

·         articles

·         question formation

·         variety of tenses

·         dependent prepositions


Some final tips

 

Avoid contractions (I’m, they’re, we’re) as this is a formal writing.

Avoid the use of first person pronouns (I, my, our, us).

Practise under timed conditions.

Use model answers to practise fixed expressions.

 https://oxfordhousebcn.com/en/how-to-write-a-c1-advanced-essay/

 

CAE essay examples

https://www.caeexamtips.com/blog/c1-essay-examples

 

Exam task on page 63

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