Wednesday, 3 March 2021

7.6. Sentence adverbs and how to write an essay



C1-Level Article: Endangered Species in Quintana Roo


Admittedly, Quintana Roo is known for its breathtaking natural beauty — from turquoise coasts to lush tropical jungles. Yet, behind this paradise lies a worrying reality: the region’s biodiversity is at risk. Sadly, several species such as the jaguar, the manatee, and the scarlet macaw are disappearing faster than we realize. This crisis is only the tip of the iceberg, reflecting deeper environmental problems like deforestation, pollution, and illegal hunting.

 

Apparently, local communities and conservation groups are fighting hard to protect these animals. Fortunately, many of them are down to earth in their approach, combining scientific research with traditional ecological knowledge. For instance, eco-reserves such as Sian Ka’an are a breath of fresh air for both wildlife and visitors, reminding us that sustainable tourism can coexist with conservation.

 

Mysteriously, despite the growing awareness, some species vanish out of the blue, their habitats destroyed overnight. Unsurprisingly, financial constraints make it hard for small NGOs to keep their heads above water. Still, their dedication is inspiring — they know every rescued turtle or reforested hectare is more than a drop in the ocean.

 

Happily, young environmentalists in CancΓΊn and Tulum are over the moon when new hatchlings reach the sea or a rescued jaguar returns to the wild. Obviously, the fight to protect endangered species in Quintana Roo is far from over, but each act of care shows that when we neglect nature, we play with fire — and when we protect it, we secure our own future.


Reading Comprehension Exercise

https://www.topworksheets.com/t/HQBe-KE7Q2y

 

 Sentence adverbs

 

Some adverbs refer to a whole statement and not just a part of it. They are called sentence adverbs and they act as a comment, showing the attitude or opinion of the speaker or writer to a particular situation.

 

Clearly, there have been unacceptable delays.

(= It is clear that there have been unacceptable delays.)

 

Sadly, the forests are now under threat.

(= It is sad that the forests are now under threat.)

 

Curiously, he never visited America.

(= It's curious that he never visited America.)

 

The sentence adverbs are used to convey the writer or speaker's opinion that it is clear/sad/curious that something happened or is the case. If you compare the way clearly, sadly, and curiously are used in the next three sentences, you can easily see the difference between the meaning of the sentence adverbs and the 'ordinary' adverbs:

 

He spoke clearly and with conviction.

(= He spoke in a clear way and with conviction.)

 

She smiled sadly.

(= She smiled in a sad way.)

 

He looked at her curiously.

(= He looked at her in a curious/inquisitive way.)

https://www.lexico.com/grammar/sentence-adverbs

 

Exercise 1 on page 62


πŸ• Title: The Fate of Endangered Species

 

🎯 Objective:

Students will use sentence adverbs (e.g., admittedly, apparently, fortunately, generally, sadly, unexpectedly, unsurprisingly, obviously) to express opinions and attitudes about endangered species.

 

⏱️ Timing: 15 minutes total

Step 1 – Warm-up (3 minutes)

Teacher says:

“Think of one endangered species you know. What do you know about it?”

  • Students briefly share ideas in pairs.
  • Teacher writes examples on the board (e.g., tiger, panda, sea turtle).

 

Step 2 – Adverb Focus (4 minutes)

Teacher review:
Explain that sentence adverbs express the speaker’s opinion about the whole sentence, not just the verb.
Examples on the board:

  • Sadly, many species are disappearing every year.
  • Fortunately, some governments are taking action.
  • Apparently, pollution is a bigger threat than hunting.

Ask students to reformulate two of their warm-up sentences using one adverb.

 

Step 3 – Discussion in pairs (6 minutes)

Prompt cards:

πŸ… Card 1: Zoos help protect endangered species.

🌎 Card 2: Governments should spend more money on wildlife conservation.

🐘 Card 3: Tourism can help save animals from extinction.

🌑️ Card 4: Climate change is the biggest threat to endangered species.

🦜 Card 5: People should stop using products made from animals.

🐒 Card 6: Technology and science will eventually solve the extinction problem.

🌿 Card 7: Education is the best way to raise awareness about endangered species.

🦈 Card 8: Humans and animals can coexist peacefully if laws are respected.

 

Write five sentences in teams expressing your opinion about the assigned case including the sentence adverbs.


Endangered Animals Video


Listening Comprehension Exercise

What endangered animals do you know?


Collaborative Reading of the Writing Exam Task Instructions on page 63


Debate Video of Ways Governments could help Endangered Species

Listening Comprehension Exercise

Collaborative Reading of the Sample Essay on page 63

 

How to write an essay

 

Steps for writing an essay:

1.- Make a plan

2.- Structure your essay

3.- Proofread

 

Essay Structure:

 

1.- Introduction

Here you want to introduce the topic in your own words. Your first line should also grab the reader’s attention, then you should paraphrase the question. Finally, try using a statistic or a rhetorical question. This will make them want to read on, right?

2.- Body Paragraph 1

Discuss the first option you’ve chosen. Include a good topic sentence and remember to give reasons for your answer. Describe some of the advantages, and even some of the disadvantages too. This will give a well-balanced argument.

3.- Body Paragraph 2

Here’s where you introduce the second option. Again, try to present both sides of the argument and give reasons for your ideas. Gradually work towards the conclusion.

4.- Conclusion

State your final opinion. This should be a summary of the rest of the essay and point clearly to which option you think is the most important. Do not introduce any new arguments at this stage. The conclusion is where you tie-up any loose ends.

  

Useful expressions:

 

1.- For the introduction:

It is often said that…

Many people feel that…

We live in an age when..

More and more…

 

2.- For addition:

Firstly, secondly, thirdly…

On the one hand…

In addition…

What is more…

 

3.- For exemplifying:

For example…

For instance…

As a case in point…

 

4.- For contrasting:

In contrast…

On the other hand…

Alternatively…

However…

 

5.- For the conclusion:

All things considered…

As far as I am concerned…

In light of the above…

In conclusion…

 

What the examiners are looking for:

1.- Content:

Have you answered all parts of the question? Is everything relevant to the question?

2.- Communicative Achievement:

Is the style and tone appropriate? Remember it should be semi-formal and neutral.

3.- Organisation:

Does it follow a logical order? Have you used paragraphs and linking devices?

4.- Language:

Are you using a variety of grammar and vocabulary? Is it accurate?

 

What is not allowed to use in an essay:

1.- Contractions - I’m, they’re, we’re) as this is a formal.

2.- Phrasal verbs - take on, carry on, take up...

3.- Slang words - knackered, chap...

4.- Idioms - over the moon, play with fire...

5.- Short words - uni, emo...

6.- Abbreviations - ASAP, LOL...

 

* Try not to use the first person pronouns (I, my, our, us).

 

https://oxfordhousebcn.com/en/how-to-write-a-c1-advanced-essay/

 

CAE essay examples

https://www.caeexamtips.com/blog/c1-essay-examples

 

Exam task on page 63


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